Constructive Criticism Please! : Anarchism for Drunk Punks

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rich wrote:
>but I guarantee that the punks will pick up on them and
>view you as a politician looking for converts.
That's because I am!

Amazing I love this type on honesty. I mean lets not fudge the issue, we make anarchist arguments because we want people to agree with us we want people to become anarchists. I hate this pomo liberal bullshit that we should all respect each others opinions. I'm an anarchist because I think anarchist arguments are right. Simple as.

On the pamphlet. I think its brilliant.

Also I like the list and I like it long. Long lists are good. Kind of like throwing sand in someones face is better than throwing a few pebbles. It is more abrasive.

Just a few things

I agree with seamers about the unemployment thing. Anyway the bit under unemployment only explains our position on unemployment if you already know our position on unemployment. Maybe you could have something like 'Getting rid of the bosses means they can't fire us or keep us without work. We'll be in control of our labour'.

And the wars bit is a bit simple. Maybe something like 'Wars only replace one group of rulers with another. Without rulers we won't have them.'

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There have been vegetarian types on the flakey fringes of the anarchist movement in the past, the weakness of the uk anarchist movement means that those fringes are the majority of the thing here.

I don't think that this is because of the weakness of the UK anarchist movement but more to do with the strength of the UK AR movement. There are a good proportion of anarchists that are vegetarians/vegans and they often aren't your typical AR types. This is because anarchists are generally caring people who think about the world and how they affect it. Anarchists have always been linked to social progression and have been at the forefront of the struggle to achieve equality on the grounds of race and gender. Personally I think given enough time, the way animals are treated today will be viewed by society as a whole, much how we now view slavery (apart from that bitch on Shipwrecked!). Some anarchists, rightly or wrongly, extended their values to the animal kingdom. I'm not suggesting you include a section on animal rights or anything but I don't think you can categorically say anarchism is not about animal rights just because you don't think it is. To be honest I think you should get rid of that whole "what anarchism isn't" section. I know it is tempting because you're wanting to set people straight on some crap you've heard from them but you can always put them right in person and the guide can be further reading. I reckon it should be much like a regular introduction to anarchism but with a greater relevance to punks.

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Under the local section, you could include the details of The Great Commotion and also Now or Never! (particular the latter, because it's the kind of publication that punks enjoy - plus I'm sure they wouldn't mind a bit of free advertising).

Hell yeah!

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I think that instead of the Spain '36 bit, just perhaps a list of where anarchist societies have taken place would be better. Because just focusing on Spain makes it seem like 'oh but that was ages ago, how is it relevant?'. Whereas just listing lots of examples is better just to show that it is possible and has happened in the past but that there's no specific emphasis on anything.

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I don't think that this is because of the weakness of the UK anarchist movement but more to do with the strength of the UK AR movement. There are a good proportion of anarchists that are vegetarians/vegans and they often aren't your typical AR types. This is because anarchists are generally caring people who think about the world and how they affect it. Anarchists have always been linked to social progression and have been at the forefront of the struggle to achieve equality on the grounds of race and gender. Personally I think given enough time, the way animals are treated today will be viewed by society as a whole, much how we now view slavery (apart from that bitch on Shipwrecked!). Some anarchists, rightly or wrongly, extended their values to the animal kingdom. I'm not suggesting you include a section on animal rights or anything but I don't think you can categorically say anarchism is not about animal rights just because you don't think it is. To be honest I think you should get rid of that whole "what anarchism isn't" section. I know it is tempting because you're wanting to set people straight on some crap you've heard from them but you can always put them right in person and the guide can be further reading. I reckon it should be much like a regular introduction to anarchism but with a greater relevance to punks.

Anarchism and animal rights aren't the same thing. That doesn't mean that it's necessarily opposed to animal rights, or that many anarchists aren't involved with it, but the truth is that other than tending to attract many of the same people, AR has nothing in common with anarchism and there is nothing in your post that shows that it does. Anarchism is, and has been, a system that concerns humans.

And I think the what anarchism is not list is one of most important parts. There are so many people who talk shit about what they think anarchism is. Perhaps underneath there could a be a sentence saying something like: "Although these things are not essential to anarchism, it doesn't mean that some anarchists don't support some of them." Although that might be a little confusing underneath a list that has things like chaos and capitalism on it.

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I think that instead of the Spain '36 bit, just perhaps a list of where anarchist societies have taken place would be better. Because just focusing on Spain makes it seem like 'oh but that was ages ago, how is it relevant?'. Whereas just listing lots of examples is better just to show that it is possible and has happened in the past but that there's no specific emphasis on anything.

Nah, keep the bit about spain. It's important because it has the potential to show how anarchism actually has worked, therefore increasing it's credibility as a viable political system. Saying that though, the part about spain could be better. I think it needs more information about how society changed. Include more about how the changes affected the everyday life of the workers and so on. The whole section on spain seems a bit lacking at the moment.

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I'm still thinking about all this - thank you everyone for your comments! At the moment, I'm thinking of expanding the booklet to perhaps 50% bigger or double its current size to include: song lyrics, more examples of anarchism in action (suggestions most welcome), glossary, making the Spain bit better (but also just one of several examples), stuff about local things like NoN!, Norwich Anarchists etc.

I'm thinking go for punk songs, rather than lots of swearing (to get me punk points!). Most of the punks here ain't so stereotypical! (Though I may do an offensive version for kicks sometime in the future). Even if I haven't namechecked you specifically, I'm bearing everyone's comments in mind, thank you all for commenting. It's been really handy, and will improve the thing massively.

So: good examples of anarchism in action? (Aside from Spain wink )

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>but I guarantee that the punks will pick up on them and
>view you as a politician looking for converts.
That's because I am!

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Amazing I love this type on honesty. I mean lets not fudge the issue, we make anarchist arguments because we want people to agree with us we want people to become anarchists. I hate this pomo liberal bullshit that we should all respect each others opinions. I'm an anarchist because I think anarchist arguments are right. Simple as.

Liberal my bollicks, it was more along the lines of politicians one and all, up against the fucking wall, and the definition of politicians as being parasites who claim to represent other people for their own benefit.

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Coconut man wrote:

Anarchism and animal rights aren't the same thing. That doesn't mean that it's necessarily opposed to animal rights, or that many anarchists aren't involved with it, but the truth is that other than tending to attract many of the same people, AR has nothing in common with anarchism and there is nothing in your post that shows that it does. Anarchism is, and has been, a system that concerns humans.

I wasn't suggesting animals rights was necessarily an integral part of anarchism, personally I agree that it isn't, but for some people it is. I was just making the point that making sweeping statements about what anarchism isn't may not be a good idea and could be off putting.

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I think this is a great resource, How about having the stuff that's only relevent locally being on a seperate page to everything else. So (for example) we could replace South Wales Anarchists info on that page and make up a load ourselves.

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I think it's great rich.

Something that should go in, either in the what anarchism isn't, or in the eco bit, is;-

*primitivism!...to be 'green' we don't have to go back to the stone age (as if it existed as some static state we could remain in!). Or even to sort out social problems.

*technology (part of above point really). anti-technology is a flawed idea, technology is something humans have the capacity to create, we can't not do it! That we may use inappropriate tech is a symptom of the drive for profit and our separation from the natural world, not a cause.

all difficult to put simply tho! i can't imagine how, you describe that simply!

I'm for keeping spain in!...just say there are smal scale eg's but spain is one in which anarchists organised everything they needed, not just the odd bits.

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Also.....
Whilst i agree that some of the language could be simplified, i think often people are more enthusiastic about ideas if the had to a certain amount of thinking to understand it.
Handing stuff to people on a plate is to far in the other direction (compared to confusing them)

You could spend hours making it simple, but if people are interested by it and they have to look up "fascism", "strike", "the spanish civil war" on wikipedia...then they're pretty much at a meeting!
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>but I guarantee that the punks will pick up on them and
>view you as a politician looking for converts.
That's because I am!
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Amazing I love this type on honesty. I mean lets not fudge the issue, we make anarchist arguments because we want people to agree with us we want people to become anarchists. I hate this pomo liberal bullshit that we should all respect each others opinions. I'm an anarchist because I think anarchist arguments are right. Simple as.

Liberal my bollicks, it was more along the lines of politicians one and all, up against the fucking wall, and the definition of politicians as being parasites who claim to represent other people for their own benefit.

Sorry just saw this. Fair enough, I thought you were complaining about trying to convert people. My mistake. Sorry.

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Is this in pdf format?

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Dunno about the Norwich version, but the version Sheff AF made (before I joined the group, so I bear no responsibility whatsoever for the contents) is online here: http://yorks-afed.org/images/anarchismfordrunkpunks.pdf (shiny new edition, with 100% less unacceptable jokes).

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Good, but I still would like the norwich one aswell smile

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I think the concept of an easy, to-the point leaflet is excellent but I have several concerns.

I've thought about this type of propaganda before - and if it is aimed at 'drunk punks' as seems to be the case then they ain't gonna read more than one or two pages before the white cider kicks in.

As it stands the leaflet appears quite condescending to 'punks' although I know where you're coming from. I'd prefer to see a more general leaflet that could be handed out in a pub, or anywhere else, rather than confined to punk gigs, or a basic leaflet but with added sections depending on where it is being handed out - propaganda for target audiences. Sounds awful but hope you know what I mean.

I'd like a batch of leaflets I could take into comrades at work (with info relevant to workplace struggle), leave in dole queues (with relevant info for those on benefits), ones for punks, ones area-specific as another poster pointed out etc etc

I think you should remove the animal rights statement. It is condescending in the extreme.

"You can tell a society by the way it treats its animals" - can't recall who said it but the implications are clear - animal liberation has very clear parallels with anarchism - to suggest social justice is for humans only is precisely the justification for their maltreatment, and is speciest, a hierarchy (see Peter Singer). In philosophical terms we award rights to sentient beings and if that is not extended to animals then we have a hierarchy. This is an illustration and not meant to be a debate on the subject. Really I know a lot of people who would throw the leaflet back at you because of that one sentence.

The swearing will attract a lot of people - a lot of workers like people saying what they really feel instead of beating around the bush. It will put some of but you can have a nice posh version for the liberal in your life.

For a specifically punk leaflet the lyrics are a good idea because the concept is crouched in their familiar subculture.

All said I think you have a good template - all the very best with it.

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propaganda for target audiences. Sounds awful but hope you know what I mean.

it's only awful if it involves promising one thing to one audience and a mutually exclusive one to another in the populist style. writing a leaflet aimed at wage workers focussing on the problems of wage workers, and one aimed at dole queues focussing on the problems of unemployment etc is just good communcation skills.

Something we've discussed in Brighton is the large number of people involved in single-issue activism vs libertarian communism. we obviously think it's impossible to address climate change, crime and punishment, border controls etc except as part of a wider struggle against capitalism, a struggle which can't be waged simply by adding anticapitalist rhetoric to activist forms of organising (as per 'give up activism'). So were looking into a series of pamphlets giving an anarcho-syndicalist perspective on such problems and the solutions we propose.

a lot of people have the impression anarcho-syndicalism is just like activism, only we chose workers as our oppressed victim of choice instead of Palestinians, lab animals, starving Africans etc. Obviously that's a complete misunderstanding of what class analysis and class politics entail, but it's a widespread misconception some clear, short pamphlets could help remedy. I don't see why in principle this can't apply to other subcultures such as drunk punks, as long as it's understood as targetted propadanda at particular sections of the class, rather than a subcultural orientation per se.

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I love it when people make things like this.

Just make sure the words fit on the page; i.e don't get cut in half into the next line. I've had punks stop reading because of this!

If you're desperate for something a bit more modern maybe put something about the federalism of the zapatistas

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Typographical point: don't use sans-serif for large blocks of text.

Shit! This site is fucked then!

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Typographical point: don't use sans-serif for large blocks of text.

Shit! This site is fucked then!

really? most websites use serif headers and sans serif body... is it different in print? (we currently use arial for everything, because we're thoroughly unimaginitive, but we'll come up with a proper theme in the not too distant future.)

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I find sans serif to be more readable, they are essential on computers.
In print i think its just a matter of style, i think sans serif is more modern looking, but most books seem to use serif fonts.

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Joseph Kay wrote:
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Typographical point: don't use sans-serif for large blocks of text.

Shit! This site is fucked then!

really? most websites use serif headers and sans serif body... is it different in print? (we currently use arial for everything, because we're thoroughly unimaginitive, but we'll come up with a proper theme in the not too distant future.)

yes, the rules for online are different.

Large blocks of written text people read more easily with a serif font, that's why pretty much all books and newspapers use them.

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Wow, fonts...

Joseph I think the leaflets you suggest, offering a syndicalist analysis of single-issue campaigns might be quite useful. It is clear many of the issues involved are symptoms, and tackling symptoms rather than the direct cause does not cure. (The climate change issue is rather immediate though and despite being a single-issue it potentially affects everyone, and very soon.)

Yes Banpen the Zapatistas might be a useful illustration of direct demoracy (however the national liberation aspect is still a reality).

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Steven. wrote:
yes, the rules for online are different.

Large blocks of written text people read more easily with a serif font, that's why pretty much all books and newspapers use them.

I suspect it's more to do with custom and tradition than anything. But a lot of "design tips" sound a bit dubious to me...

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there's a reason stuff designed/laid out by professionals or experienced amateurs is generally better than everything else though; they know what they're doing. seems like music to me, the rules can be broken to creative effect, but they exist for a reason (and just like musicians, great designers may be unaware when they're following or breaking rules, but for the rest of us not blessed with instinctive talent, studying them can help a lot).

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Joseph Kay wrote:
there's a reason stuff designed/laid out by professionals or experienced amateurs is generally better than everything else though; they know what they're doing. seems like music to me, the rules can be broken to creative effect, but they exist for a reason (and just like musicians, great designers may be unaware when they're following or breaking rules, but for the rest of us not blessed with instinctive talent, studying them can help a lot).

That's pretty deep for a discussion about fonts...

~J.

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over-analysis is my forte grin

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The "established wisdom" is that serif fonts are easier to read in print as long as you print with good enough resolution, but that the opposite is true on the Internet, because your screen resolution is much lower than what you get in a book or magazine. Not everyone agrees though. Se http://www.alexpoole.info/academic/literaturereview.html for a review of some recent literature on the subject.

But whether you use serif or sans-serif, what is more important is to use a large enough font-size that people can read comfortably. The Anarchism for Drunk Punks pamphlet fails miserably on this count: It is barely readable when you are sober; there is just no way that anyone is going to read that while drunk...

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Joseph, that series of texts seems like a very good idea.

I'm not sure if you were part of the group when we started the everyday manifesto:
http://libcom.org/everyday-manifesto

Because that sounds like something which could dovetail with that quite nicely. The manifesto was something we thought about doing as a collaborative thing with other groups/individuals. With the impending general election next year it could be something worth relaunching, possibly as part of a general "don't vote, organise" type propaganda campaign.

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Steven. wrote:
Joseph, that series of texts seems like a very good idea.

I'm not sure if you were part of the group when we started the everyday manifesto:
http://libcom.org/everyday-manifesto

Because that sounds like something which could dovetail with that quite nicely. The manifesto was something we thought about doing as a collaborative thing with other groups/individuals. With the impending general election next year it could be something worth relaunching, possibly as part of a general "don't vote, organise" type propaganda campaign.

yeah, this might dovetail quite well. at present we've had an internal discussion on anti-militarism and a short pamphlet's in the works. i'm also researching environmental issues for a session i've been asked to do at SolFed's internal weekend school in a couple of months, so that could lead to one too. other topics we've mooted are crime and punishment, migration and science (both from a perspective of science workers and critiquing the way science functions under capital, without throwing the baby out with the bathwater).

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Steven. wrote:
yes, the rules for online are different.

Large blocks of written text people read more easily with a serif font, that's why pretty much all books and newspapers use them.

I suspect it's more to do with custom and tradition than anything. But a lot of "design tips" sound a bit dubious to me...

Nah, you are talking pure bollox. Lay out a large body of text on a page in a sans and its instantly noticable (to anyone with half an eye for aesthetics) how poorly it looks/reads. There are always exceptions, like with all rules and internet forums are not print publications.