New translation of 'the platform'

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New translation of 'the platform'

This has been in preparation for over a year but Nestor has finnally finished work on the new translation. Haven't had time to do a comparision but loads of significant differences are obvious. EG the last line

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Only in this way can it fulfil its task, its theoretical and historical mission in the social revolution of labour, and become the organised vanguard of their emancipating process.

New version

Only thus will it be able to fulfil its role, to carry out its theoretical and historical mission in the social revolution of the workers and become the organized cutting edge in their process of emancipation.

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Eighty years have passed since the publication in the pages of the Russian anarchist monthly Delo Truda of the Organizational Platform of the General Union of Anarchists (Draft), but the question of anarchist organization remains an open one even today, a question which sparks off ferocious debates with frightening ease. We now present a new English translation of the Platform.

Previous English translations of the Platform have suffered from the fact that they were translated, not directly from the Russian, but via French. So, in order to commemorate the 80th anniversary of its publication, we set about preparing a new translation directly from Russian. ..

http://www.anarkismo.net/newswire.php?story_id=1000

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Jul 7 2006 12:22

The new translation conveniently ignores the much abused term "vanguard" then?

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Jul 7 2006 12:25

grin .... is just what I was thinking.

"Cutting edge," eh? Just out of interest, what's the word in Russian which has been translated here as "cutting edge"?

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Jul 7 2006 12:50

Is this like when they do updated & trendy versions of the bible? wink

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Jul 7 2006 12:53

C'mon Steve -- the platform is far more important than the bible. You know that!

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Jul 7 2006 15:38
mattkidd12 wrote:
The new translation conveniently ignores the much abused term "vanguard" then?

As I understand it 'vanguard' is not the most accurate translation from the Russian.

But the author of this translation is one of the Anarkismo editorial group and I'm sure he will be more than happy to discuss this question if you post it in a sensible manner to anarkismo. He has spent well over a year getting it right with the help of Will Firth and Mikhail Tsovma both of whom are well trusted translators of Russian language anarchist material and neither of who are 'platformists' as far as I'm aware.

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Jul 7 2006 17:09
mattkidd12 wrote:
The new translation conveniently ignores the much abused term "vanguard" then?

Anarchists used to all happily use the term vanguard back in the day. Apparently the Platform's main translator - Voline - was its main detractor though, so some accuse him of distorting meanings to slag it off.

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Jul 7 2006 19:05
John. wrote:

Anarchists used to all happily use the term vanguard back in the day. Apparently the Platform's main translator - Voline - was its main detractor though, so some accuse him of distorting meanings to slag it off.

Thats a relief, its nice to see an intelligent comment in amongst all the despiriting snideness, the apolitical nature of much of the discussion on this site gets to me sometimes.

Anyway anyone involved in the drafting of collective statements will know that often intense discussion can happen around whether to use one term or another. So for translations trying to recover the precise original meaning is pretty interesting.

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Jul 7 2006 19:51

I am amazed that the way in which Voline acted around the Paltform isn 't better known by its latter-day detractors, tbh. It is well covered in Skirda's "Facing the Enemy".

I can also see the point in recasting the Platform in language that makes sense today, especially if you think it still has things to teach us.

What are your main criticisms of the platform, Joe?

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Jul 7 2006 20:04

Oi. Go and post on my thread on vanguards. I asked this question first! Vanguard was indeed a word happily used by anarchists until recently, Kropotkin actually edited a periodical called Vanguard.

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Jul 7 2006 20:13
mattkidd12 wrote:
The new translation conveniently ignores the much abused term "vanguard" then?

Since most people have a completely different understanding of the term to the original translators, it seems fairly reasonable to me.

Though "cutting edge" is a horrible phrase, it really is.

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Jul 7 2006 21:58
madashell wrote:
Though "cutting edge" is a horrible phrase, it really is.

Yeah it's way worse!

I won't say more till checking out MoM's thread (good to see you back btw).

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Jul 8 2006 13:26
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Yeah it's way worse!

What would be a better term, though? I can't think of anything that doesn't give the wrong impression of what the Platform was arguing for. "Vanguard" has completely different connotations than when the Platform was first translated into English.

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Jul 8 2006 15:09

Yeah, basically any section of the working class can be in the vanguard of the class struggle - it was the FBU a couple of years back, the miners in the eighties, and fuck help us the civil service and lecturers most recently. Most people (who would even use the term vanguard) don't use the term that way or think of it like that at all these days though.

I think the problem arose when the term vanguard became more associated with the Bolshevik thing of building the party as the formalised vanguard of the working class, the professional revolutionary cadre that would act as the 'collective memory' of the class, learn the lessons of history and tell the rest of us all what to do to successfully carry out the revolution. roll eyes

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Yeah, basically any section of the working class can be in the vanguard of the class struggle - it was the FBU a couple of years back, the miners in the eighties, and fuck help us the civil service and lecturers most recently. Most people (who would even use the term vanguard) don't use the term that way or think of it like that at all these days though.

I don't think that historical interpretation is correct. It was explicitly understood to mean not just an intellectual vanguard or the most militant section of the working class as you suppose, but also an organisational vanguard. The FAI would be the best example of this, they were formed to stop the CNT becoming a reformist organisation and consciously gained substantial control over the CNT. It's not just that the use of the word has changed, it appears to me that most anarchist theory now rejects the idea of an organisational vanguard, a group of militants who aim to 'push the revolution forward,' rather than just disusing the language to disassociate themselves from Leninists.

I am not sure that this shift of emphasis away from the need for organisation towards spontaneity has been a productive or desirable one.

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Jul 8 2006 17:18
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I am not sure that this shift of emphasis away from the need for organisation towards spontaneity has been a productive or desirable one.

While I am willing to take on board the rest of your point, apart my doubts about the accuracy of your portrayal of the 'control' apparantly exercised over the CNT by the organisational vanguard that allegedly was the FAI, I really don't reckon that that last remark holds true for class struggle anarchists/libertarian communists. Where exactly is this shift towards spontaneity over organisation. Do you just think you see it given the small and rather fractured state of the current class struggle anarchist/libertarian communist movement?

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Jul 8 2006 19:46
meanoldman wrote:
The FAI would be the best example of this, they were formed to stop the CNT becoming a reformist organisation and consciously gained substantial control over the CNT

And we all know how well that ended wink

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Jul 8 2006 21:04
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The FAI would be the best example of this, they were formed to stop the CNT becoming a reformist organisation and consciously gained substantial control over the CNT.

That's often claimed but i've never seen any evidence for it from the CNT or FAI themselves, rather than people's assumptions. Do you have any? Because one would think that such a federation (which would be, for all intents and purposes, platformist) would have been to the CNT's left and not to its right by sending people such as Federica Montseny to Cortes.

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Jul 9 2006 10:22
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Most people (who would even use the term vanguard) don't use the term that way or think of it like that at all these days though.

I think the problem arose when the term vanguard became more associated with the Bolshevik thing of building the party as the formalised vanguard of the working class, the professional revolutionary cadre that would act as the 'collective memory' of the class, learn the lessons of history and tell the rest of us all what to do to successfully carry out the revolution. roll eyes

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I dunno why people don't use avant garde - means exactly the same thing without the trottism.

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Jul 9 2006 10:28
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the apolitical nature of much of the discussion on this site gets to me sometimes.

The first page of this forum doesn't look very apolitical to me.

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Jul 9 2006 11:21
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JoeBlack2 wrote:
the apolitical nature of much of the discussion on this site gets to me sometimes.

The first page of this forum doesn't look very apolitical to me.

Err I didn't say LibCom was apolitical I said 'the apolitical nature of much of the discussion'.

By this I was referring to the 'witty' one lines that were the inital 'response' to the thread - from people who have disagreements with the platform but who didn't express these politically.

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Jul 9 2006 11:27

Joe I think you know full well peoples problem with the Platform.

It's either a meaningless document arguing a redundant point, or it's a pseudo Leninist document that argues for a national executive and a permanent "leadership of ideas". In this it is even behind the ICC who atleast accept that the "leadership of ideas" is something fluxuating.

I also have huge problems with it's mechanical concept of the "vanguard" and the role of so called "revolutionaries".

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Jul 9 2006 11:48
revol68 wrote:
Joe I think you know full well peoples problem with the Platform.

Actually not in the case of the people who posted. Or are you creating a mystic 'people' with a collective response to it?

Will return to your points when I'm less hung over as I think the confusion over these issues is one of the big weaknesses of English anarchism at the moment.

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Jul 9 2006 12:00

well it think the general point is that people are dismissive cos it is a rather uninteresting and unprofound document with the very liberal interpretations people bestow on it, or it is an interesting document but one represents little more than a libertarian leninism, where all that changes is the politics being argued.

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Jul 10 2006 10:29
pingtiao wrote:
I can also see the point in recasting the Platform in language that makes sense today, especially if you think it still has things to teach us.

I don't actually think this is what the translator of this version was doing - he seemed more concerned with producing a more accurate translation then the old English language one. If you take 'vanguard' for instance the Russian word for 'vanguard' is not in the original and as Makhno uses that word in other articles presumably if it was what was intended here he'd have used that word. The actual word used could be litereally translated as 'sniper' apparently but the sense of it is more along the lines of pioneer, someone who clears a path. (I pointed out the thread to the author and he passed this along to me in an email)

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What are your main criticisms of the platform, Joe?

The original title was 'Organizational Platform of the General Union of Anarchists (Draft)' and within those limits (a draft document on organisation) their are two main problems

1. This implication that there can only be one anarchist organisation into which all serious anarchists can be grouped. This might be ideal but the reality will often be that political differences may mean two or more organisations will exist.

2. The section on the Executive Committee of the Union is very under developed and thus left them open to all sorts of accusations.

Fundamentally it is not clear how this executive is formed and what form of recall exists for it.

In general it also lacks the level of detail in every area that would be required if we wanted to treat the platform as a blue print for how to organise. Quite probably this is a good thing as I'm not sure trying a line by line implementation of a document from 80 years ago would be a good way of addressing organisational questions today.

To me the value of the document lies precisly where revol68's false binary denies it. I don't think the organisational questions it address can be resolved as either being 'leninism' or 'common sense'. Indeed the value of the Malatesta contributions in the debate is that he demonstrates how the issue of 'collective responsibility' is not common sense to anarchists at all but something that needs to be debated and resolved.

As a blueprint the platform has no value today - its main purpose has been as a point of identification for anarchist communist groups who have most often came to the conclusions it raises before they have discovered the existence of this particular document. By this I refer to the opening paragraph "Despite the force and unquestionably positive character of anarchist ideas, despite the clarity and completeness of anarchist positions with regard to the social revolution, and despite the heroism and countless sacrifices of anarchists in the struggle for Anarchist Communism, it is very telling that in spite of all this, the anarchist movement has always remained weak and has most often featured in the history of working-class struggles, not as a determining factor, but rather as a fringe phenomenon.".

In general those who have sought organisational solutions to these problems have often been faced with the reply 'you are not anarchists' not only from inside the anarchist movement but also from outside it where they are eyed up as potential recruits. If anything this has become worse in recent years with the idea that anarchists can only use consensus and cannot have any form of formal organisation at all. The 'Organizational Platform of the General Union of Anarchists (Draft)' is of value as one of a number of documents that show that addressing these concerns is very much a part of anarchism.

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Jul 10 2006 14:14

Revol you're way too fucking smart and well-read too use an idiotic and meaningless phrase like "libertarian leninism". What's next, "fair trade"?

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Jul 10 2006 15:24

roll eyes roll eyes roll eyes roll eyes

The only "leninist" thing about it is the school of falsification that equates Makhno with Lenin, Arshinov with Trotsky.

I know you were joking Jack, but still...

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Jul 10 2006 18:08
OliverTwister wrote:
Revol you're way too fucking smart and well-read too use an idiotic and meaningless phrase like "libertarian leninism". What's next, "fair trade"?

well sorry but if we take the Platform in it's strictest terms, with the national executive et al then I see no difference between it and the Leninist concept of the Party as advocated by the ICC etc.

If we give it a generous reading we are left with the non point that people need to come to collective agreements.

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revol68 wrote:
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Revol you're way too fucking smart and well-read too use an idiotic and meaningless phrase like "libertarian leninism". What's next, "fair trade"?

well sorry but if we take the Platform in it's strictest terms, with the national executive et al then I see no difference between it and the Leninist concept of the Party as advocated by the ICC etc.

If we give it a generous reading we are left with the non point that people need to come to collective agreements.

Sorry that's only a non-point with non-anarchists.

I mean FFS malatesta was the only one with good critiques of the platform, and some of his strongest reservations seem to be based around faulty translations (by Voline no less). I have a lot of respect for Voline and I don't want to insinuate that he would have mistranslated the platform out of spite, but he certainly hated the "non point that people need to come to collective agreements". The platform is not a Bible that Bakunin descended out of the sky to give to the Dielo Trouda group - it is one solid expression of the organized tendency of anarchist-communism that had earlier manifested around Bakunin and would later manifest around the FoD and Georges Fontenis, not in a mystical sort of way but as a general trend of learning from failures. At the risk of sounding ridiculous, I think the platform is the best thing to come out of the russian revolution.

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Jul 11 2006 17:17

the platform had fuck all squared to do with the Friends of Durruti, beyond various platformists (not to mention left communist and trot groups) attempts to root it within that tradition.

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Jul 11 2006 17:31

Right, now try reading my post rather than just grabbing individual words so you can make a halfway coherent point.