All are welcome to leave some constructive criticism on this. By constructive criticism I don't mean praise, I mean picking out things that could be made better, and suggestions how that could be done. I have a few things I think I'd like to change for the next draft, but I don't want to colour people's critiques.
In the end I thought I'd go for something that was simple enough to read even if you were drunk... Though TBH that's what I aim for with everything I write.
Cheers, Rich
It's an A6 booklet.
